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Proposal → 3 rewritten versions

Shorter, more assertive, and more empathetic — pick the best one.

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Act as a pitch doctor. Read this proposal draft. Produce 3 rewritten versions, each optimizing for a different axis: 1. Shorter (30% fewer words, same points) 2. More assertive (drops hedging, leads with results) 3. More empathetic (more acknowledgment of the client's pain points) For each version, explain in 1 sentence what you changed. Proposal draft: {{proposal}}